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The Envoirment Song

Post  TaraMitchell_<3 on Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:49 pm

When blue skies turn to grey, I feels like a big unhappy holiday!
Like when the leaves turn brown and then they start to fall on the ground!

It's like our whole world is falling apart, like when the school was fall of chavs and then is one tart!
Why does the envoirment have to fade away, like I did the other day!
And everyone doesn't notice you!

Trees turn green the whole world is clean!
Why can't it be like that everyday?
But the only awnser is the envoirment is changing!

Just like us! ooohoohoohooh the envioment is changing!
oohoohooohoohooh
The enviorment is changing!

I love macdonalds, and ubi too
I wish i could just go for a poo
But it just wont come out
Though i scream and shout
I hate ryan and james
cuz they call me names
I wish they had nothing to say
I wish they would faaaaaaaaaaaaaade awwwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyy!
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Post  Admin on Wed Jun 04, 2008 5:47 pm

My first suggestion for improvement would be to check your grammar. Your mother claims she is very good at english (?!?) so maybe ask her...
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Post  James on Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:22 am

im sorry but even with replacement grammar the meaning of the song just doesn't work. you don't fade away unfortunately

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Post  TaraMitchell_<3 on Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:40 am

fine. thanx sam
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